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Kumoyuki Hono
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| | Subject: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:23 am | |
| Hono,Kumoyuki  -General Information- Kumoyuki Hono Nickname: Prince of The Frozen Flames Gender: Male Age: 16 Appearance/Clothing. KumoYuki wears a long Dark blue cloak which covers his White shirt and Dark blue pants. He also wears a long white scarf to cover his mouth as well as a Dark blue hood that he never wears. His shoes are Dark blue although they have white stripes. On the back of his cloak, is his clans symbol along with his trademark weapons, twin Kris daggers which sit underneath the cloak on each side of his sides. He also wears one Black glove which is fingerless. Personality: Kumyoyuki despite being the leader of his clan, has a warm heart and a pleasant deamenor. He is usually really quiet and reserved only either talking when spoken to or when around women. Although he likes to drink he can never drink enough to get fully drunk, When angered his attitude changes completely usually resulting in him freezing anything in his path. -Tribe Information- Tribe: Providence Rank: C Elements: Hyogaton Specialties: [/color] Jutsu Learner Extras: Enhanced Sight, Enhanced Chakra Flaws: Partial Blindness(left eye), Depth Perception(left eye) .Clan Information. KKG: Hyogaton Clan: Korinohono History:Kumoyuki was born in The snowy days of december in his clans hidden village in a cave not far from providence . It was then that his life started. As a small boy, he often watched his father and brother spar everyday. When he wanted to join, he was told by his father that he would never become a ninja. HIs father dislike him due to the fact that his mother was not of the clan. Kumoyuki was determined to prove his father wrong. Everyday after his father and brother sparred, he woud sneak out and practice whatever he saw them using in the spars. As time went on, he would be the youngest boy in the village to learn most of the villages clan jutsu that were even forbidden for him to learn at his age. One day while training, he was caught by his father, who was furious to see him doing this. He was punished by his father severly resulting in a long gash going down his spin. Still infuriated, he was thrown into the isolation cell in the main house, where he stayed for a total of 8 months, only eating scraps.HIs first month there he continued practicing, despite what his father said, he would become stronger than him and take the mantle of leader. At the end of his sentence, he had just turned nine, coming out physically and mentally stronger. He would soon leave the village to go become a ninja. During his time in the academy he was one of the "cool" often being called a polar bear on the account of how cold he was. He was at the top of his class, excelling in chakra control and the clone technique. At the age of ten, he graduated at the top of his class and became a ninja. After graduating, he was soon put into a cell, where he was put with two of his classmates. Together they formed Team 5 and started going on missions. Their mission success went up mission after mission, giving them a 60% mission success only after 3 months after becoming a team. One night, he went back to his clan to take what was rightfully his. Sneaking into the archives he took the scrolls containing the clans secret jutsu and then went to the clans storeroom where he took the daggers of his clan. He left as silently as he came, returning back to his home in New Eden. As time went on, with the help of the scrolls, he mastered all of his clans jutsu, before turning 11. At this point both him and his team were getting ready for the chunin exams, training everyday. On the day of the exams, he would see his fellow clansmen fighting. As the second test arrived, he would have to fight them but the fight was interupted by another team, which were ultimately defeated by Hono and his team. During the third match, he would have to fight one of his clansmen. which tried to kill him. It was during this time that Kumoyuki would make a miraculous comeback. He would freeze the boys legs, which would freeze the boy over time. This was a jutsu not even the boy knew. IN the last exam, he ultimately passed and became a chunin along with his team. Role Play Sample: - Spoiler:
Sasaki was giving a mission my the mizukage to go and kill a mysterious creature that lies in the forest. Sasaki would grab his sword and walk from his house to the outskirts of the village. Once he was prepared, he would stop at the gates," this moster or beast is probably no bigger than a wild boar," he would say as he started to walk into the forest. Once in he would look around, to get a general feel of the forest, he would then jump into one of the closest trees and begin his hunt for this beast. As he was jumping through the trees, when he would look down and see a set of odd footprints. He stopped and hopped down to investigate the tracks," definitely not boar tracks, definitely going to be fun," he said feeling the tracks. He has seen a normal boar prints, but these were not normal or boar. He would then stand up and try to follow the prints, trying to see if he could follow them.
As the tracking of the footprints commence, they would stop and go a different direction," damn this thing is either really dumb or reall crafty, this might be even better than i first thought. I hope this thing puts up a good fight," he would say as he chopped some of the branches out of his way. As sasaki would track these tracks, he would follow them until they came to a small cave. The cave had a truly grotesque smell," ah dam what is that smell, smells like something died in here," he said gagging at the smell. He would walk into the cave, from the outside it looked rather small, but looks can always be decieving. As he ventured deeper into the cave the smell became stronger, until eventually it was at its breaking point. He would start to look around and see something in a corner, something what was way bigger than a boar," ok so that is the beast i need to kill, this will be easy," he said unsheathing his blade. As he began to creep closer he would make a fatal mistake as he would kick a small rock which pinged off where his target had been. The beast turned around its eyes glowing a sinister yellow color as it charged at him.
Sasaki would quickly jump over the beast as it ran out of the cave." dammit, oh well at least this will be more of a challenege," he said as he chased after it. The beast was only 5 meters ahead of him from what he cold tell as he took to the trees to gain a lead over it. After a while, the beast stopped looking around for its assaulter, when Sasaki would jump from the tree and kick it in its face, sending it back a little," finally caught up with you... oh you are a really big beast," he said looking at in a better light. The beast would shake its head and prepare to charge, sasaki waiting for the right moment to strike. The beast charged at him, sasaki stood there waiting for the right moment to jump as the beast would hit the tree behind him. Sasaki would then use his sword to cut the tree in half making it fall on the unknown beast. As he would slowly sheathe his blade, he would here the now in half tree move as the beast charged at him, knocking him off of his feet. Sasaki would then fly into a tree making a nice dent into tree. Sasaki groans a little," Ok you little piece of crap, i was only intending of crushing you but now i am going to cut you in half," he said angrily. he was now enraged that something as ugly as this touched his, now he unsheathed his sword, provoking it to charge. The beast taking the bait, roared and started to run at him, as sasaki stood there, the beast would have no idea what was about to happen. The beast stopped in front of sasaki abruptly as it started to bleed, Sasaki would then appear behind it, its blood stained onto his blade. He would then make a vertical slice across its lower regions, making it drop to its stomache, dead. He would now clean his blade, flicking it into the air as, he would slowly put it back into its sheathe. Sasaki would now walk back through the forest to get back to his village where he would now report in and tell him of the events that transpired..
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| | | | Blaine
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 5:44 am | |
| - Kumoyuki Hono wrote:
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Hono,Kumoyuki
[IMG] [/IMG] Take out one of the ING pair tags please. - Quote :
- -General Information-
Name: Kumoyuki Hono
Nickname: Prince of The Frozen Flames
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Appearance/Clothing.
KumoYuki wears a long Dark blue cloak which covers his White shirt and Dark blue pants. He also wears a long white scarf to cover his mouth as well as a Dark blue hood that he never wears. His shoes are Dark blue although they have white stripes. On the back of his cloak, is his clans symbol along with his trademark weapons, twin Kris daggers which sit underneath the cloak on each side of his sides. He also wears one Black glove which is fingerless.
Personality:
Kumyoyuki despite being the leader of his clan, has a warm heart and a pleasant deamenor. He is usually really quiet and reserved only either talking when spoken to or when around women. Although he likes to drink he can never drink enough to get fully drunk, When angered his attitude changes completely usually resulting in him freezing anything in his path.
-Tribe Information- Tribe: {The tribe of your choice.}
Rank: B
Can we raise the word count on the subjects if it is to be a B rank. I could take the length as is as a C however. You also need to add in which Tribe you are from. - Quote :
Elements: Hyogaton
Specialties: [/color] Ninjutsu
Extras: Enhanced Sight, Enhanced Chakra
Flaws: Partial Blindness(left eye), Depth Perception(left eye)
Ninjutsu is not a specialty, please read the rules. The whole left eye would have to be blind completely. - Quote :
.Clan Information.
KKG: Sharingan/Hyogaton
Clan: Uchiha/Korinohono
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, NO. I am not allowing dual clans okay, again please look at the rules under tribes and clans guide. It will really help you understand the difference between the clan and the bloodline ability aka KKG. I'll check it again after this is fixed. | |
| | | | Kumoyuki Hono
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 2:31 pm | |
| a couple of questions are now in order from me if you do not mind. When i had sked you yesterday in the CB about my clan being an offset of the uchihs you had no problems. It only means that instead of using flames of fire they use flames of ice and instead of fire being their superior element they use Hyogaton. Now as for the blindness bit, why does it have to be full blindness...that would prohibit him from seeing fully instead of just half.
As for everything else i can change it accordingly | |
| | | | Blaine
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:38 pm | |
| You put they had the sharingan, the bloodline is where you put your KKG(bloodline ability) Clan is where you put them in what clan they are in, and that corresponds with Tribe.
Full blindness is more of a disadvantage and that is what the example is, half damage would be more of a minor. | |
| | | | Kumoyuki Hono
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 8:21 pm | |
| if he is fully blind he cant use the sharingan and that would not even make sense... At least with partial blindness he can still be utilized as a ninja and with his depth perception in his left eye also lessened to where he can hardly use it he has to depend on his right eye which is a greater flaw | |
| | | | Blaine
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 8:36 pm | |
| He wouldn't be able to use the sharingan in the first place.
Its either your custom KKG or the Sharingan, not both.
Kakashi fought great using just one eye so really the only weakness is dodging attacks from that side. A greater flaw is being able to not use one eye at all. | |
| | | | Kumoyuki Hono
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 8:43 pm | |
| he could still use his other eye perfectly without a problem. the fact that he has little to no depth perception in one eye plus he can hardly see out of it makes it alot harder for him to fight | |
| | | | Blaine
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 8:47 pm | |
| OHHHHH you mean in alternate eyes then, okay that makes more sense. You still will have to pick between your custom KKG or the Sharingan though. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 8:48 pm | |
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| | | | Blaine
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| | Subject: Re: Kumoyuki Hono Sun Dec 30, 2012 8:55 pm | |
| Alrighty, take out the daggers, add a bit more make it around 150 words min. For appearance there. Take out the part about leading your clan and expand to 150 words.
Clan: Korinohono
Pick a clan for your Providence tribe to be placed in.
History needs to fit in with the IC world, three hundred word min there.
And as said in the CB please read the spec guide and spend a C rank worth of points for levels in the specs. | |
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